We are a Year 4 and 5 class at St Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. We are in Room 6 and our teacher is Mrs Twomey.
Saturday 8 August 2015
How Adults/Brothers/Sisters Could be Better!!! by kevin
I think Adults would be better if they stop drinking lots of alcohol in front of their children.
1. Adults should play board games with their children more often so they can have fun together.
2. They need to stop smoking because it can damage their children's lungs and it can cause cancer.
3. Adults should stop fighting in front of their children so they won't do the same thing when they become adults themselves.
I think the most important one is that adults should always love,feed and take care of their kids.
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Persuasive writing;adults
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