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Monday, 14 March 2016

The three little Butterflies by Angelina

Learning  Intention. W.A.L.T.- write a narrative story about tiny creatures.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I wrote a story about butterflies.

Once upon a time their lived three little butterflies.Their names are Mina, Lina, and Tina .At night they went to shopped for food.When they finished shopping they went to their cousin's house and got ready to go the party.
   Once they were at the party they fell asleep,so their cousin took them home.But before they can go home a bat came.It was looking for butterflies to eat.So the butterflies called their dad.Their dad said," it is okay, I will help you". Their dad tricked the bat and it flew away. 
Then the happiness came again,because the bat never came back.


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