About Room 6

Thursday, 6 June 2013


The Storm
It was a stormy day and lighting came and hit a tree and cut the branches.

There was flood because of the storm. I could not sleep because I was frightened of the lighting and the heavy rain. The rain sounds like giants blowing the earth. I felt that the earth was shaking because of the storm.

Lots of trees were also shaking and leaves were falling. I was worried because I thought that the trees would fall onto our house and cause damage. Leaves were blown all over the place.

I was scared because I think all the windows are going to break. The wind was so strong that nearly all the leaves from the trees are gone. The windows were shaking and slammed. I was terrified so I ran to my room and jumped in bed until I fell asleep.      

By Shannon                                                       

3 comments:

  1. Hi Shannon

    Fantastic story you wrote. You really improved in your work. I hope I could see more of your work. Keep up the good work.

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  2. Hey Shannon,
    It must have been scary it must have taken a long time to clean it up. Keep up the good posts.

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  3. Hi Shannon

    I like your story, it is also interesting. I like that you used some Ambitious Vocabulary. I would like to see more of your fabulous work.

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