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Friday, 8 May 2015

Happy Mother's day! By Mana

                   THE COOLEST MUM EVER! MY MUM IS THE BEST MUM THAT A FAMILY COULD EVER WISH FOR. SHE SUPPORTS ME IN SPORTS WHETHER I WIN OR LOSE.SHE'S ALSO HELPFUL WHEN I AM STUCK WITH MY HOMEWORK OR WHEN I NEED HELP CLEANING  MY ROOM. SHE IS ALWAYS THERE FOR ME. MY MUM WORKS HARD SO SHE CAN HAVE MONEY TO PAY FOR MY SISTER'S UNIVERSITY AND PAYS FOR THE BILLS FROM THE BANK.I LOVE MY MUM VERY MUCH AND SHE SAYS I AM HER NUMBER ONE FAN.

WALT: WRITE A DESCRIPTION.

SUCCESS CRITERIA: I KNOW I CAN DO THIS WHEN I USE THE RIGHT STRUCTURE FOR MY WRITING. 

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