We are a Year 4 and 5 class at St Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. We are in Room 6 and our teacher is Mrs Twomey.
Friday 7 August 2015
Chocolates by Mary
Children should be allowed to eat chocolate whenever they want to
I think children should be allowed to eat chocolate whenever they want to because they have fruits and fruits are healthy.
I think children should be allowed to eat chocolate because it is yummy and delicious.Children should eat chocolate because it has different flavours.
Children like's to eat chocolate because it has milk and it is healthy.
Children should not eat lots of chocolate because it has sugar and it can make you fat.
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