We are a Year 4 and 5 class at St Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. We are in Room 6 and our teacher is Mrs Twomey.
Monday 21 September 2015
Captured by Aliens by Lupe
Ahhh!! Im captured by aliens!!
My spaceship landed perfectly on Saturn. When I opened the door and went out to explore, creepy aliens came and captured me.
I woke up in darkness, then a bright light appeared. They asked me how is life on Earth. I told them there are worms, snakes and spiders in houses.I had a thought that they wanted to come and destroy earth, so I lied.
I also said that people hate each other and they hate aliens, and if they see aliens they'll shoot them because they are harmful. I said the water is poisonous. I told them that earth is in a middle of a war, that's why I came to Saturn. They looked at each other and set me free. So, I hopped into my spaceship and flew to the moon.
I will never go back to Saturn ever again.
Tuesday 1 September 2015
Living in the moon! Yes? or No? by Uinisieti
Living in the moon! Yes? or No?
I think I want to stay in the moon because I can find other materials that I don't know about in the moon.I want to live in the moon so I can explore it.
I want to live in the moon because we can float and jump really high there.I think I want to live in the moon because you can see the solar system and its planets.I think I should live in the moon because even though there is no water,air or wind you can still bring your own food to eat.
I should live in the moon because it is close to earth and I can visit earth whenever I want to.
Should we stay in the moon ? Yes or No !? by Xyril
I want to stay in the moon because I can learn new things about it.
I want to stay in the moon so I can float because there is very little gravity. I want to find out if there are minerals in the moon.
I also want to learn about the meteors that have fallen to the moon.
The important thing is, I want to go to moon because I want to know if there are living things in it.
L.I-WALT write a persuasive writing.
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