Should Children Eat Chocolate or
Not?
I think children should be
allowed to eat chocolate whenever they want to because it has milk, and milk
gives us calcium. It makes me happy because it tastes delicious. We should eat
chocolate whenever we want because it has fruits.
Children should not be
allowed to eat chocolate whenever we want to because it has lots of sugar which
gives you diabetes. If you eat too much chocolate it makes you silly. It has
lollies, and lollies make your teeth rotten.
Do you think chocolate is
good or bad?
By Aiden
I really like your persuasive text Aiden. I think chocolate is good in small doses, but too much of a good thing is bad for you! Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteLove, Mum.
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ReplyDeleteHi Aiden, I like the way you put lots of adjectives on your piece of writing and I also like how you asked a question as your conclusion.
ReplyDeleteWow Aiden! I really like your argument about eating chocolate. I think we should eat chocolate because I think it's delicious as well.
ReplyDeleteGreat persuasive writing Aiden.
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