We are a Year 4 and 5 class at St Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. We are in Room 6 and our teacher is Mrs Twomey.
Tuesday 11 August 2015
How friends could be better- by Elisha
My friends don't say mean words to me because they can hurt my feelings.
I want a friend that is honest and tells me the truth, so I will know what happened. I want a friend that is helpful when I need some help with my homework.
I want a friend who always smiles at me and other people because she looks happy and not grumpy.
Most of all I want a friend that will play with me and also likes books and games.
L.I. we are learning to write a persuasive writing.
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Persuasive writing
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