We are a Year 4 and 5 class at St Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. We are in Room 6 and our teacher is Mrs Twomey.
Monday 10 August 2015
How Friends could be better by Kevin
I think friends would be better if they will never swear at you.
I want friends to stop leaving their other friends behind, because the other one will be left alone with nobody to play with.
A friend would be nice if they will never throw their pencils at each other in the classroom because the pencils might hit and hurt them if they are pointy.
I think the most important things a friend can do is that they will play games together and make sure the games are not too rough, so nobody can get hurt.
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