How friends could be better- by Elisha

My friends don't say mean words to me because they can hurt my feelings. I want a friend that is honest and tells me the truth, so I will know what happened. I want a friend that is helpful when I need some help with my homework. I want a friend who always smiles at me and other people because she looks happy and not grumpy. Most of all I want a friend that will play with me and also likes books and games. L.I. we are learning to write a persuasive writing.

How Friends could be better by Kevin

I think friends would be better if they will never swear at you. I want friends to stop leaving their other friends behind, because the other one will be left alone with nobody to play with. A friend would be nice if they will never throw their pencils at each other in the classroom because the pencils might hit and hurt them if they are pointy. I think the most important things a friend can do is that they will play games together and make sure the games are not too rough, so nobody can get hurt.

How could a friend be better by Akesa

A friend could be better if they share reading books with one another. I think friends should take turn on playing the iPad because it won't be fair for the other friend not to have a turn. I believe a friend could be better if she will stop calling names at other friends. I like a friend who always help others by asking, " do you need help"? Most importantly, a friend could be better if she should not tell lies to people because I will get in trouble from the teacher or my parents and I will be sad.

How Adults/Brothers/Sisters Could be Better!!! by kevin

I think Adults would be better if they stop drinking lots of alcohol in front of their children. 1. Adults should play board games with their children more often so they can have fun together. 2. They need to stop smoking because it can damage their children's lungs and it can cause cancer. 3. Adults should stop fighting in front of their children so they won't do the same thing when they become adults themselves. I think the most important one is that adults should always love,feed and take care of their kids.

I think children deserves to eat chocolate when ever they want to! by Punipuao

I think children should be allowed to eat chocolate because it has milk.Milk Is good for all kids because it will make you healthy.Milk gives you energy,like running or playing sport. Children should be allowed to eat chocolate because it has fruits.Fruits is tasty and healthy for growing kids. I think kids should be allowed to eat chocolate because it is delicious,fantastic and sweet. Chocolate is not healthy , if you eat too much you will get fat and have rotten teeth. The most important is that kids should be allowed to eat chocolate when ever they want to because chocolate has yummy flavours.

Chocolates by Mary

Children should be allowed to eat chocolate whenever they want to I think children should be allowed to eat chocolate whenever they want to because they have fruits and fruits are healthy. I think children should be allowed to eat chocolate because it is yummy and delicious.Children should eat chocolate because it has different flavours. Children like's to eat chocolate because it has milk and it is healthy. Children should not eat lots of chocolate because it has sugar and it can make you fat.

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